Appearance

1. [ ] They have an unnatural eye color (e.g. Red, Purple etc.)  

2. [ ] That eye color is red

3. (x) Eyes that change colour

4. [x] They have Heterochromia

5. [ ] They have an unnatural Fur Color (e.g. Red, Purple, Green etc.)

6. [x] They have visible scars on their bodies

7. [ ] They are stunningly handsome/cute/beautiful

8. [ ] They are muscular

9. [ ] They are either exceptionally tall or small

10. [ ] They have no determinable breed

11. [ ] They look younger than they actually are

12. [ ] They are blind

13. [ ] They are deaf either slightly or completely

14. [ ] They have a bad sense of smell

15. [ ] They have a limb or eye missing

16. [ ] They are a ginger she-cat or a tortoiseshell tom

Total 3/16

Backstory

1. [ ] They have amnesia

2. [ ] They were born as a Rogue or Loner

3. [x] Either one or both Parents were tragically killed by something either a fox, another cat etc.

4. [ ] They were once a kitty-pet

5. [ ] They have a long-lost sibling

6. [x] They are descended from a previous Leader

7. [ ] They don't know they are descended from a Leader

8. [ ] They are descended from a previous Leader and hold a high up position in the clan

9. [ ] They were born from an Inter-clan relationship

10. [ ] Either one or both of their Parents are/were cruel and abusing

11. [ ] They witnessed the death of one or both parents

12. [ ] They never knew their parents

13. [ ] They were abused or spoiled as a kit

14. [ ] They are involved in some prophecy

15. [x] They have visited The Dark Forest

16. [ ] Certain smells, sounds and appearances remind them of a traumatic event in their past

17. [ ] They had an abusive mate in the past

18. [ ] Related to one of the cats from the original books

19. [ ] They are a reincarnated character

20. [ ] They are destined to become Leader of their Clan

21. [ ] At least one sibling died when they were a kit or Apprentice.

Total 3/37

Name

1. [ ] They have an unusual name, not something usually found in the books (e.g. Xepherstrike, Galexyfall, Sparklestar etc.)

2. [ ] Their name refers to Fire, Lightning, Death or Darkness

3. [ ] Their name has the prefix Jay-

4. [ ] Their name is similar to a character from a film/series/anime/book that you are a fan of

Total 0/41

Relationships

1. [ ] They have lots of/no friends

2. [ ] They have an Inter-Clan Relationship

3. [ ] They have more than one mate

4. [ ] They have lots of romantic interests fighting over them

5. [ ] They personally have a lot of romantic interests

6. [ ] They are a Medicine Cat with a forbidden Relationship

7. [ ] They have a crush on a character of the same gender

8. [ ] They are unsure if they'll ever be able to trust anyone to love

9. [x] Other Cats think they are attractive

10. [x] They met and fell in love with another cat within one month of story-time

Total 2/51

Characteristics

1. [ ] They have Autism

2. [ ] They have schizophrenia

3. [x] They have a split-personality disorder 

4. [ ] They are insane

5. [ ] They struggle to stay sane

6. [ ] They have special powers

7. [ ] They are a very kind character that will always try to help those who others don't want to approach. 1

8. [x] They are very intelligent

9. [x] They are misunderstood by those around them

10. [ ] They are mysterious/dark

11. [ ] Their mood changes erratically

12. [ ] They have insomnia

13. (x) Really opens up when you get to know them

14. [ ] Loves Kits and Elders

15. [x] Has a Protective Nature of either all their clanmates or only those they're close to

16. [X] They are emotional

17. [ ] They have a naive/cute/innocent characteristic 

18. [ ] They never lose a fight

19. [ ] They don't believe in Starclan

20. [ ] Overpowered (e.g. Have killed a Badger/Fox/Sharptooth/Two-Legs almost single pawed).

21. [ ] Is a pacifist

22. [ ] Can talk to two-legs

23. [x] Feels sorry for the prey they kill 

24. [x] Deep down they are kind-hearted

Total 7/75

Point Reductions

You can deduct points from your total here. 

1. [ ] They have a short-temper

2. [ ] They enjoy picking on or bullying others

3. [ ] They are of average intelligence

4. [x] They are average height

5. [ ] Their eye color is yellow or green (No Heterochromia)

6. [ ] They have a natural fur pattern for their breed 

7. [ ] They are from a litter of three or more (That survived to Apprentice-hood)

1

Total /75

05 Points Anti-Sue

::: Your character is a little boring and dull, perhaps it wouldn't hurt to add some more to their character :::

06 - 15 Balanced Character

::: You have a well-balanced character with just the right amount of interesting, without going over the top. Odds are your character is quite unique :::

16 - 25 Borderline Mary-Sue

::: Your getting a little close there, might want to tone some things down or add a couple more flaws :::

26 - Mary-Sue

::: Your character needs a serious personality make-over :::

35 - Ultimate Mary-Sue

::: Kill it with fire :::

                                                                           

Amber's Family Tree

Father's Side

Hazestar + Finchwing = Featherlight and Talonblaze

Featherlight + Strikeblaze = Blossomcloud, Lightstar and Ashbreeze

Lightstar + Bouldertail = Tawnyfall and Lichenfall 

Lichenfall + Adderfoot = Whitefoot and Snowyheart

Whitefoot + Flowertail = Rainspring and Ambershine 

Mother's Side

Clearwhisker +